by Isabella Fazio

Main Character


Camryn is a nineteen year old girl from Pennsylvania. She is in college and is studying to be a day care manager. She has blue eyes and blonde hair that is long and wavy. She is tall, about 5 feet, 9 inches. Camryn is mostly into soccer or swimming. She has 6 other brothers and sisters, Carl, Fredrick John, Matthew (Matty for short), Shannon and Lauren. Camryn is the youngest and is usually called Camy by her neighbors and her 3 friends, Amanda Kelsy and Britney. Camryn met Amanda and Kelsy in high school 2 years ago and now are in college together. Britney and Camryn have been friends since 2nd grade at Carlson Elementary School.


The cruise ship is very busy with people. The activities make it perfect. They have inside water parks and slides, clothes shopping and souveniere shops. There are a lot of families. People with their children are in the water. The food is free but it is so delicious that you'd think it's from France's top chefs. Their beds are so comfortable they fall asleep as soon as the lay down. The view is amazing. The water around them is beautiful. It's hot but breezy. The breeze smells salty but is refreshing. The greatest thing is the view at 6:45 when the sun is setting and the colors are bright and vibrant.

Second Character


Britney, who is 22, has been friends with Camryn for 16 years and they have now graduated college. Britney wants to be a clothing designer. She has blonde hair and blue eyes. She is tall and skinny. She loves to draw and is into designer clothes, barrets, hair stuff, nail polish and shoes. She'll tell you all the best brand names and best stores. She is a great friend and is a lot of fun to be around.

Secret Passage

The secret passage is a purple whirlpool in the middle of the ocean. Inside is a tube of water that feels like sandpaper because the whirlpool is moving so fast. The tube's water is clear so sharks, fish and reefs are visible.

Some of the animals try to enter the tube but it's like a force field. The scent is like an aquatic bed of flowers. Despite its peaceful appearance, the secret passage is a very dangerous place.